tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33555282.post6131158418156447362..comments2014-07-14T14:52:59.684-04:00Comments on Grey Pemaquid: On MondaySashahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00483234172434544811noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33555282.post-11558611417247935382007-04-19T19:33:00.000-04:002007-04-19T19:33:00.000-04:00this is really beautiful and touching. there are s...this is really beautiful and touching. there are so many lovely lines and a heartwrenching ending.Jessicahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09701158085304753313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33555282.post-215391443396930342007-04-19T16:02:00.000-04:002007-04-19T16:02:00.000-04:00Oh Sasha. So beautiful. So heartfelt. I'm with ...Oh Sasha. So beautiful. So heartfelt. I'm with the gang-no editing needed. This poem is comforting, somehow. Thank you. It is hard to be a mom and a witness to the sometimes cruel world at the same time.jillypoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14951224240914478371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33555282.post-60198053831418104302007-04-19T15:52:00.000-04:002007-04-19T15:52:00.000-04:00Wow--you've written something lugubrious but beaut...Wow--you've written something lugubrious but beautiful. I love this as a poem and as a message. I will definitely be back to read some more.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33555282.post-56451979526018791692007-04-19T14:52:00.000-04:002007-04-19T14:52:00.000-04:00Very sad event. Your ending was especially perfect...Very sad event. Your ending was especially perfect.Beamanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10516397458228874124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33555282.post-11959463474671862322007-04-19T13:15:00.000-04:002007-04-19T13:15:00.000-04:00It has to be raw and unedited. No mother desires t...It has to be raw and unedited. No mother desires this. No mother deserves this.gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33555282.post-19017798271810362462007-04-19T12:27:00.000-04:002007-04-19T12:27:00.000-04:00One moment in a lifetime... for all of us, indeed....One moment in a lifetime... for all of us, indeed...<BR/>Just heartbreaking...Reginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14287107184977896696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33555282.post-10490696940948141072007-04-19T10:36:00.000-04:002007-04-19T10:36:00.000-04:00Haunting and beautiful. The first thing I thought...Haunting and beautiful. The first thing I thought after reading the last line, was a soft, whispered, "amen."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33555282.post-40308310716405389072007-04-19T10:08:00.000-04:002007-04-19T10:08:00.000-04:00It does feel a little raw to me, but I think it mi...It does feel a little raw to me, but I think it might be better that way. Because it works beautifully as a prayer or incantation, which follows somewhat different rules than a regular poem. In any case, thanks very much for sharing this. I'll be linking.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33555282.post-60499061773543027972007-04-19T08:44:00.000-04:002007-04-19T08:44:00.000-04:00I agree with everyone that this is perfect the way...I agree with everyone that this is perfect the way it is, and it enlightening to read after the VT news.Clockworkchrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09889793842709699969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33555282.post-16740412109592007222007-04-19T07:47:00.000-04:002007-04-19T07:47:00.000-04:00a beautiful juxtaposition of hope and griefa beautiful juxtaposition of hope and griefPaulinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14555472024981357622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33555282.post-23018297182734385402007-04-19T06:14:00.000-04:002007-04-19T06:14:00.000-04:00I do not think that this needs any editing either....I do not think that this needs any editing either. It is sincere and affecting. Beautiful.Gino Brignolihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01527513315061424819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33555282.post-6254459227281762452007-04-19T05:57:00.000-04:002007-04-19T05:57:00.000-04:00beautifully moving and it doesn't feel raw and une...beautifully moving and it doesn't feel raw and unedited at all.Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.com